Posted by: Prem Piyush | July 3, 2008

The eternal dreams

Closing my eyes –
I wish to live with –
My dreams –
They are true –
In themselves.

Along with my soul –
They will be with me,
Till my last sleep.
When you wouldn’t say –
“Wake up”.

Let me sleep.
For a while –
If you can,
Wherever you are,
Close your eyes too,
And please share,
Along with me –
The eternal dreams.


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  1. Indeed the poem is good one!

    But, I was expecting image something painted by you! Hope in future you will put your own creation!

  2. Your poem reminded me the following lines from the song “Betab dil ki tamanna………….” 😀

    “bhigi bhigi palkon par, sapne kitane sajaye hain
    dil mein jitana andhera tha, utane ujaale aaye hain
    tum bhee hum ko jagaanaa naa, baaho mein jo so jaaye
    jaise khushaboo fulon mein, tum mein yu hi kho jaaye…”

    Geet ke prasang se gurrrrrrrrrrrr kit kittttttttttt ho kar yeh mat kahena ki “tum aur bus tumhare geet…. Geet ke alawa such sujhta hi nahin…. Geeton ki encyclopeadia ho kya?” 😛

    Lastly, nice poem and saying “Amen” for your eternal dreams.

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