Posted by: Prem Piyush | June 6, 2007

कुछ आवाज



अकेली रास्तों में,
कुछ कंपन थी,
उन हवाओं की,
अनजानी दिशाओं से ,
उनकी आवाजें कहलाती –
और धीमे-धीमे,
मन को बहलाती,
और अनजाने में,
देह को थिरकाती ।

कुछ देर बाद,
गुँजती दीवारों में –
फिर कहीं खो जाती ।
पुकारता मैं,
आवाज देकर,
उन आवाजों को ।
वापस
कुछ आती तो –
बस मेरी आवाज ।
और रह जाती,
सिर से पैर तक,
चुपचाप सी एक कंपन ।

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Responses

  1. “मुझे दीवारों से बातें करना अच्छा लगता है!”
    Nice Poem! Your poem has inspired me to write a poem, I will put that in my blog!
    Anyway, after reading ur poem I am just remembering some songs which I always listen…..!
    “kabhi kisi ko muqamal jahan nehi milta ,
    kabhi jamin to kabhi asman nehi milta ,
    juban mili hai per ham juban nehi milta”

  2. @TTW
    “मुझे दीवारों से बातें करना अच्छा लगता है!” – samet diya itne mehnat se likhe poem ko ek line mein !!
    Will wait for yours one.
    Beautiful lines of the song. Reading itself echoes the song in the ears. In fact the lines are a reality too.
    Thanks for liking the poem.

  3. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

  4. Prem sir,

    meri aadat hi kuchh aisi hai….bikharte tinko ko simat mutthi mein bhar lena…. just kiding. 🙂

    Anyway, I am providing link and you can read my poem here which I have written-

    http://rewa.wordpress.com/tag/my-hindi-poems/

    rgds

  5. @TTH,

    “bikharte tinko ko simat mutthi mein bhar lena” and you are kidding. :-O

    Nice Poem. Posted again a poem as a comment there. Hope you will like that.

    Thanks a lot.

  6. *****,
    So many stars and where is my mmmmmmmmm moon.

  7. Very Nice Poem,
    I liked it……………:)


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