Posted by: Prem Piyush | March 8, 2007

छुईमुई


गोल गुलाबी फुलों में ,
मेरे घर के सामने,
आज हरे पत्तों में घिरी ,
खिली है एक छुईमुई ।Chui Mui Blooming

मन करता है छू लूँ ।
बैठ बच्चों की तरह निहारूँ ।
बचपन की मेरी संगिनी,
चुपचाप सुनती छुईमुई ।

पहचान न सका कोई,
अनजानी बनी रही वो,
गुलाबों से भी प्यारी,
छोटी सी एक छुईमुई ।

Chui Mui Plantएक पहचान की प्यासी,
एक छुवन को अभिलाषी,
वैसी ही शरमाती लजाती,
राह तकती एक छुईमुई ।

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Responses

  1. A beautiful poem.

    You know what your poem reminded me my old day. The happy day as a child.

    I used to play it with a lot. We call it Laajwanti. I used to touch it and wait it to come it’s normal shap and again touched and so on…. I used to do for many hours….. I love to play with Laajwanti and happy to she her getting shy again and again…

    Lovely. 🙂

  2. Not so Effective

  3. May be you should add more effective words and elaborate it

  4. This is really very touching poem.

  5. Nice Poem.

  6. it contains good materials

  7. EXCELLENT


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